Disappearing Rain

By: Deena Larsen

At first I really did not know where to start because there were so many options. I first went to the link that said “Come on in” then I thought ‘The Water’s Fine’ would be a good place to start reading. I began at ‘The Word’ then after going through the titles from ‘Knowing thru Melted Water’. I realized that I should have started from part one.

I enjoyed reading this story and it is easy to follow. I did not have any trouble with the links because they gave me a good sense of what this story is all about. The only problem is that each time I read a passage and click on a link in the passage, I could either go further in the story or backwards into a section that I have already read.